专升本、四级英语考试解析（八十八） ​​​​

　2017年12月大学英语四级考试真题第一套

　　Part I Writing (25 minutes)

　　Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy on how to best

　　handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least

　　120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　题目解析：

　　一、 审题：四级写作的第一步即读懂题目要求。读题目时我们需要在题干中去找“关键词”。本次作文中读完题目，建议同学们用笔勾画出来五个关键词，即五个要点，顺序依次是“30 minutes”、“essay”、“how”、“the relationship between doctors and patients”、“write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words”其中关于考试时间和作文字数的要求每年都一致。接下来审题的重点：这次写作要求我们写一篇常见的议论文，并且去简述如何处理医生和病人的关系。读完题目之后，我们了解到这次的写作主题即“医患关系(the relationship between doctors and patients)”。

　　二、 谋篇：四级写作的第二步即布局三段结构，这次写作中强调“如何处理医患关系”，所以我们在第二段写作时，可以从两个维度出发—医生和患者—去叙述如何正确处理两个主体之间的关系。

　　三、 框架：全文分为三个段落。第一段为话题引出段(可结合情景作文第一段，先表明自己的观点);第二段为原因分析段(主要从医生/患者两个方面进行原因论述);第三段为意义阐述段。

　　四、 填充：具体的范文如下，仅做参考。

　　写作范文：

　　On the Relationship between Doctors and Patients

　　In the present age, it is generally acknowledged that the relationship between doctors and patients is playing indispensable roles in our lives. As far as I am concerned, we should balance this kind of relationship from two aspects, doctors and patients.

　　The causes of this perspective are multiple. In the first place, the reason has been cited as a major reason that doctors cannot be understood, for patients always maintain doctors can cure all kinds of disease. This is mainly due to the fACT that although medical technology and science are advanced at an amazing rate, there exists a multitude of various kinds of diseases we cannot cure. Furthermore, the reason can contribute this perspective that patients are believed to be lack of the fundamental medical knowledge, which results in this relationship are worried. Plenty of evidence has shown that an increasing number of patients often go to extremes if their diseases cannot be cure instantly.

　　When it comes to our modern society, it is universally acknowledged that dealing with the relationship between doctors and patients in a reasonable way plays a vitally important role in our lives. Undoubtedly, if we spare no efforts to do so, our future will be hopeful and promising.